Vegetal -DP

Oh, that wine was just so vegetal,

because of unripe grapes.

Picking that bottle from the shelf,

I made a huge mistake.

The smell of my back garden,

was not my desire at all.

Held up closely to my nose,

my face screwed up appalled.

It did not add complexity,

there was certainly a major flaw.

I poured it down the kitchen sink,

put the bottle outside the back door.

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Mother, daughter, sister, cat owner/slave. Thoughtful about life and trying to make it worthwhile. View all posts by lizaaitken

Covert Novelist says:

November 10, 2016 at 4:00 pm

It’s love or hate, right? hehe

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1. lizalizaskysaregrey says:
  
  November 10, 2016 at 5:17 pm
  
  🙂
  
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Covert Novelist says:

November 10, 2016 at 5:16 pm

I had to add to my site, cause it was funny and makes sense of what I also wrote, using your poem as a jumping off point. hehe

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1. lizalizaskysaregrey says:
  
  November 10, 2016 at 5:20 pm
  
  I read it was funny 🙂
  
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  1. Covert Novelist says:
    
    November 10, 2016 at 5:36 pm
    
    Phew, cause plagiarism and all and I tried to get to you before posting, and couldn’t. Dratted lag! so thank you I really appreciate this. very gracious indeed.
    
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  2. lizalizaskysaregrey says:
    
    November 10, 2016 at 5:37 pm
    
    lol your funny 🙂
    
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  3. Covert Novelist says:
    
    November 10, 2016 at 5:39 pm
    
    hehe
    
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