It was with a jolt that I woke up,
although was I really I asleep.
Was it you that whispered my name,
as so safe, so soft, so deep.
I cast my eyes into emptiness,
I’m silently calling your name.
Remembering you’ve gone away,
you’re not coming back again.
You linger here, I’m hanging on,
my mind is so full up of you.
But you’re elsewhere living life,
I’ve seen all the things you do.
I wish that we had worked it out,
that I could call you my man.
Sometimes in my day dreams,
I almost believe that I can.
I’m all alone without you now,
wondering if you think of me.
Are you in another dark room,
recalling how things used to be.
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Daily Prompt – Jolt
lizalizaskysaregrey©2017
Sad one but beautifully written to let us know about your feelings. Shocks of such jolts don’t fade away so easily.
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I made it up actually, that’s why it doesn’t have a lot of feeling I think, but thanks 😊
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Oh my, I’m so sorry 😓
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No worries, hey you believed it so that’s good. Most of my stuff is me somehow but this was just made up, might stick to the real stuff 😊
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Your fiction is this good, so better stick with it too 🙂
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Thanks Hammad 😊
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Fabulous lines 🌷
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😊
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