Over the mountains deep inside,
I take a train that’s hard to ride.
Taking pathways through my mind,
a temple I am trying to find.
A place of solace to contemplate,
progress made against mistakes.
The summing up of who I am,
and future changes where I can.
And so this journey carries on,
my ride ahead especially long.
Time now for me to make amends,
before the time my journey ends.
I love the line “I take a train that’s hard to ride”. That is one to keep in my magic box of fave quotes 💛😁 Xx
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Pleased you like it lovely 🙂 💜
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Simply- beautiful.
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Thank you 😊
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Taking pathways through my mind,
a temple I am trying to find….
Each one of us trying to find peace in this fast moving world
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Yes we are, does seam like it’s hard to find sometimes:)
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It’s elusive and depends on our needs, greed and expectations I guess… the less they are the more we move towards peace
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Yes, we have to want to find it though. Many don’t know it exists and are not happy unless filling their lives with noise.
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Very true… we have to seek it out. It won’t come by itself….
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We sure do 🙂
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Fantastic poetry and a wonderful imagery you have created. The lines flow with ease and love the rhythm.
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ThNk you, very kind of you to say 🙂
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Deep! Very interesting, I think you are evolving 🌺
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Lets hope so 😉
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So perfect on so many levels! Physical and spiritual. Loved it Liza, truly loved it!
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Wow thanks! I am very happy you like my little poems 😊
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Lovely poem babe xx
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Thanks lovely xx
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